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feed•back / féedbak/n. 1 information about the result of an experiment, etc.; response 2 Electronics return of a fraction of the output signal to the input
We're dealing with both definitions here.
Nobody creates or exists in a vacuum, not even BulletBoy, and it's cool when I hear back from folks like yourselves who have literate, constructive criticism. What's interesting is when you pause to consider HYPER-REVOLUTION was inspired by the Children of Acid, and now I have an opportunity to actually find out what the Children think about it.
So come on, don't be shy. I can take it. And I know you've got something to say. You guys and gals always do...
OMG!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!!
- Photogirl
Once more...
omg!!!
dude f***** genius!!!
- Trustn01
...Thank you!
whoa...O_o
- VintageBoi
Chatty bunch, aren't they? 8^)
ok man, you have got me hooked now. But, where are the illustrations?
- Aquarius
Hooked is good, as long as you're not in Never-Never-Land. See the FAQs for the answer to the question
all i can say is wow.....you are amazing. i love the first chapter and can't wait to read more.
- AcidRose27
Sundays and Wednesdays, baby. I'll be saving a dance for you.
Alright...very nice surprise indeed. Looking forward to seeing further progress. My fiance just got me the 25th anniversary edition of Robert M. Pirsig's Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance. Thought that was pretty ironic to one of your enteries.
- Alloy
And here I was worried nobody would catch the reference. I pick my soldiers well.
Love the imagery of the self-playing instruments and the "hive of video screens." And the wording...I'm interested in where this is going. And I thought I would have nothing to entertain me while at work today!
- nnejelf
Just doing my part to entertain the country's workforce. *salutes*
just wanted to say i like the storyline so far...i read the first chapter and i like it. youre ultra talented ....
- anathema
*swoons*
i love it. but, i'm impatient.. and want to read the whole thing NOW.
- V2thaG
Don't you love it when they get all demanding? Yes MA'AM! 8^)
Your story is great!! I wish I had some of your creativity! Great Job!!!
- Baldy
You can indeed have some of my creativity. I now accept checks, credit cards and cash. And depending on what you're offering, I might be willing to barter...
I've always followed your exploits on CoA, from the litho's to now...and just wanted to drop you a line and give you my encouragement and congratulations on Hyper-Revolution! You are truly an asset to CoA, and probably one of the most talented individuals around.
- drtygoth
In all seriousness, I appreciate that more than you know. I have the most sincere belief that talent of any kind is meant to be shared not squandered. So it's heartening to hear that there are indeed people out there who like what I'm doing and want to see where it's all heading.
And remember, you're the ones who helped inspire this so stay tuned and keep giving me feedback. You'd be surprised what makes the cut, as far as ideas go. You give me material right up 'til I put the stuff online...and beyond!
The lovely lady Spiderlily wrote me such a wonderful, flattering (which will truly get you everywhere with me -- just don't suck up too much), and insightful message on HYPER-REVOLUTION that I've decided to give it an entire page of it's own. She picked up on a lot of the subtle points that I was a little worried might not have been readily apparent to most readers. Let me know if you're in agreement with her.
Here's a snippet of what she had to say:
...I am hooked in like Neo to the Matrix (The Acid has you...), and I cannot wait for more. Wednesday and Sundays never seemed so torturously far away!!!
Is it any wonder she's been invited to join my harem?
For the full message, CLICK HERE and read, baby. No, I did not pay her to write any of it...yet. Although she's offered to script the movie of H-R when the studios come a'callin'.
I'm not kidding, she really did. You don't believe me, just read...
Your VEN story is amazing!! Wow!! You summed it up in it's reality and the futursitic nature that truly is the COA site. I am impressed! To hell with compliments for me, you deserve much praise and *bowing low*. What a gift you have! I look forward to reading the next installment, but I don't know how you will top the first. BRAVO!!!!!
- MistressG
Shucks ma'am, you're makin' me blush...
grabs popcorn and continues to read! I'm hooked!...lol yes im hooked! lol and I want more...WEE! I can't wait Marcel,,,
- SanDzNutzz
I must live right!
i am found...and have started to read.. :)
xoxo marcel, you never cease to amaze me.
- RedAkasha
The feeling is mutual, my Crimson Wonder.
your doing awesome on your new project. definately one of the most talented individuals i know. A++++
- SinPixie
Now see, that was just the right amount of flattery. Direct, short and to the point, and it builds to a crescendo at the end. I give your critique an A++++!
Well, read the first chapter...Good job and will prep myself for the next chapter.
- TonyBucher
Thanks -- I can't wait!
Lovin' the revolution!!! The whole storyline is great; the writing is well done; the characters are fun...was definitely an enjoyable read. I'm curious to see what happens next! Thanks for it!!
- cirithmoon
No baby, thank YOU...!
More
to come soon. Keep writing!
- Marcel
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